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支招小作文(159) I 动态柱图 五种商品一年四季销量

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支招小作文(159) I 动态柱图 五种商品一年四季销量






September 14, 2023

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[2023/ 9/ 9] The chart below shows the sales (US dollars) of different categories in a particular shop all the year round in the US in 2001.







【主体段分段】:



<方法1>:按照
消费类别
分段(本篇文章采用此种分段方法)

<方法2>:按照
季节
分段


【开头段】


The bar chart compares five types of consumer goods in terms of their sales(in US dollars) in a shop in US throughout 2001.


【概述段】



In general
, jewelry earned more profits than other items in the given year, but male clothing was less lucrative than others.


思路要点:

就全年来讲,jewelry整体销量较高,但male clothing的数据整体较低


【Body 1】


In winter, jewelry was
the most profitable item
, with the sales of $120000.
Subsequently
, this figure
saw a dramatic decline
to $80000 in spring,
before climbing marginally
by $20000 in autumn.
Likewise, the sales of clothing showed a similar trend.

To be more specific, from winter to spring
,
there emerged a constant drop
in both the figures for female and male clothing from roughly $83000 to $70000 and from $40000 to $20000 respectively.
The final quarter witnessed a slight rise
by around $10000 in these two figures.



语言点提示:生活化描述


思路要点:前三个类别

- Jewelry:winter销量最高($120000)→spring急剧下降到$80000→autumn小幅度上升了$20000.

- clothing的销量呈类似趋势

- female和male clothing的销量:从winter到spring,销量持续下降(分别从$83000 →$70000和$40000→$20000)

- 最后一季度两者都小幅度上升了$10000


【Body 2】



We can also see that
a different trend could be found in the sales of other two types of items.
Originally
, the sales of cosmetics($50000) were roughly twice as large as the figure for sports($30000).
Afterwards
, these two figures
grew
to the same figure at $60000 in Spring. Summer marked the season when cosmetics earned the least profit throughout the year of 2001($30000),
after which
this figure
more than doubled
to $70000 in the last quarter.
Similarly
, the sales of sports
decreased to
$40000 in summer,
followed by a slight growth
in autumn to the same figure as it was in spring.


思路要点:剩下两个类别

- 和之前三种的销量趋势不同

- 最初cosmetics销量是sports的2倍→随后这2个产品的销量上升,在spring达到相同数值$60000.

- Summer, cosmetics销量最低($30000) →在最后一个季度翻了一倍多,达到$70000

- sports:小幅度下降在summer达到$40000→autumn轻微上升回到和spring相同的数值




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